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Re: By Sun, By Moon - Chap. 1
Hey KJ!! You requested me and I'm here. Sorry if I took so long but I really needed to get out of the house. Well anyways, I loved this chapter ...
Jun 18, 2008 -
Re: Fighting the Blue
Thanks Sam, I totally get what you mean but I'm glad that you liked it.
Jun 18, 2008 -
Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 1
KJ you're doing it again! You are writing so many great stories and you leave people hanging, thirsting for more. This was too good for words. Every time you write ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: ~Michelangelo's Night and Day~Chapter One
I finished chapter 1 and I loved it. You are an amazing writer, and if I said this before then I'm not sorry, because its soo true. Nicandro! I love ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Swapping Your Blood with Formaldehyde (Part 5)
I really think was a good conclusion to the story. It was definitely unexpected and brilliant beyond words but if you ever decide to add another part PM me, :D ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1?
Hey Dal (if I may call you that) Welcome to YWS!! You have a very unique way of writing that I like. And the descriptions and the feelings that you ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
Right now I'm reading Peeps by Scott Westerfeld
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Fighting the Blue
This is for CCF's contest and the reason why I named it Fighting the Blue is because police officers wear blue and sometimes there is a war between cops of ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Swapping Your Blood with Formaldehyde (Part 5)
Again I love the way you think and I liked this part but I'm kinda sad. Is it the end? Hopefully not because I really want to read more, but ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: The Host
I finished reading The Host and I loved it. I wasn't expecting to have any doubts about this book because the Twilight series is amazingly good. My favorite character is ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: By Sun, By Moon - Prologue
Hey KJ, I really enjoyed this. For your attempt at a werewolf story this was way good. I think this should be a Prologue though, because it feels like a ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: Downright Weird
This is the third installment to my Pretty Odd series which includes 1. Pieces of Wooden Glass 2. Death by Scotch Please read these two before reading this or else ...
Jun 15, 2008 -
Re: Swapping Your Blood with Formaldehyde (Part 3 and 4)
I really loved parts 3 and 4 and I disagree with Suzanne in so many ways although her critiquing is far more advanced then mines will ever be. 1. I ...
Jun 15, 2008 -
Re: Death by Scotch
Uh scasha the MC of this part is Col and he is a boy. Col is David's brother and the first part goes into the future where Col is with ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Pieces of Wooden Glass
Thanks scasha, yeah I was feeling that it was a little rushed myself so right now I'm outlining the scene before I can add more more details. And yes they ...
Jun 13, 2008
